Correction.

I am very happy today. My teacher said,  my writing is very good. He is wondering, I am going to take MUET examination. 

Its a big compliment. Thank you Dr. 😘

Here is the correction he made.

Question

Is it wrong for the rich to get richer and the poor to get poorer?

Is it due to one’s own responsibility or circumstances?

 

Nowadays we witnessed the gap in income between rich and poor is very big getting wider. The rich men are living luxuriously but at the ^while on ^otherend people ^are struggling^to life.

People get richer due to certain factors.

Some people are gifted in some areas and they use their talents to generate an income. For example, tops chefs, singers, celebrities and motivators. They are good-looking, fluent in speech and have the ability to influence people.

People who ^are was born in a rich family are very lucky. They inherited their wealth from their father and grandparents.

They make money from their wealth. They are able to build a big business with a big capital.

Some people get richer by using their high position. Due to their position, they get a lot of opportunities win the auction and always win the tenders offered.

These rich people invest in many sectors like stocks, plantation, hotel, real estate and many more. They become richer and richer.

The big company always get tenders from the government and get the big allocation. They hire workers with a minimum pay.

They become richer but their workers struggling^e life to support their family.

In the worst situation, some people make money by pressing others. Scammers and unlicensed debtors cheat people . They make use of the trouble and the weaknesses of the people.

 

It is not wrong to get rich, but lucky men should help others and throw away their greed. They should share the opportunity with others. They should hire people with higher pay.

For illegal activities, the enforcement body should be alert and curb their activities.

However, people also can build a successful career by hardworking. Prepare self- skill and competency and can grab as many as possible opportunities and ready to face challenges.